By Vernon Hiller | The world tends to rush us along. It wants us to quickly figure things out and find out how and where we fit into the system. But sometimes we need time to process who we are befo
This was so well written. Awesome flow, tight but not dense, with no fluff or filler. Great rhythm and pacing with the varied sentence length. Technically, this was really pleasing to read and process.
As for the actual message, I loved it. So many powerful and poignant lines, but this one really stood out for me personally: "I needed time to recalibrate, evaluate and assess where I was at, and where I wanted to go in my life." So well stated, and this can be relevant at any age where we find ourselves needing to re-establish our life and/or our identity due to major events, significant changes, or unexpected losses. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful, powerful, and meaningful piece.
Thank you so much for your kind words Susan. Your comments are always so supportive and complimentary. My writing is still a work in progress. All my pieces undergo numerous edits before I feel comfortable enough to submit them. I'm definitely not a prolific writer, but I'm working on it. So glad that there was something you found relevant and meaningful.
This was so well written. Awesome flow, tight but not dense, with no fluff or filler. Great rhythm and pacing with the varied sentence length. Technically, this was really pleasing to read and process.
As for the actual message, I loved it. So many powerful and poignant lines, but this one really stood out for me personally: "I needed time to recalibrate, evaluate and assess where I was at, and where I wanted to go in my life." So well stated, and this can be relevant at any age where we find ourselves needing to re-establish our life and/or our identity due to major events, significant changes, or unexpected losses. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful, powerful, and meaningful piece.
Thank you so much for your kind words Susan. Your comments are always so supportive and complimentary. My writing is still a work in progress. All my pieces undergo numerous edits before I feel comfortable enough to submit them. I'm definitely not a prolific writer, but I'm working on it. So glad that there was something you found relevant and meaningful.