As always, I appreciated the introduction very much. For those who default to a more literal/concrete orientation, the introduction is in our “native language” and serves as a guide to enter the abstract realm of poetry without getting lost. As for the poem: it so powerfully, vividly, and accurately captures in words the intensity, darkness and turmoil of those moments.
What this poem depicts is part of the human experience, yet there seems to be widespread reluctance to deal with this end of the experiential spectrum, leading to all kinds of problems for individuals and relationships. Many can’t (don’t want to) empathize with this level of pain, not from ill will, but because it’s too dark, uncomfortable, and emotionally threatening. Consequently, people express watered down sentiments like “I’m going through a bit of a rough time” which doesn’t begin to capture the actual dread, darkness, fear and desperation being felt; then they resort to all kinds of (often inappropriate or extreme) coping measures to try and “Take my pain; let me forget”.
"Darkness by the light betrayed," indeed! So often the way isn't it? Thanks Brian.
As always, I appreciated the introduction very much. For those who default to a more literal/concrete orientation, the introduction is in our “native language” and serves as a guide to enter the abstract realm of poetry without getting lost. As for the poem: it so powerfully, vividly, and accurately captures in words the intensity, darkness and turmoil of those moments.
What this poem depicts is part of the human experience, yet there seems to be widespread reluctance to deal with this end of the experiential spectrum, leading to all kinds of problems for individuals and relationships. Many can’t (don’t want to) empathize with this level of pain, not from ill will, but because it’s too dark, uncomfortable, and emotionally threatening. Consequently, people express watered down sentiments like “I’m going through a bit of a rough time” which doesn’t begin to capture the actual dread, darkness, fear and desperation being felt; then they resort to all kinds of (often inappropriate or extreme) coping measures to try and “Take my pain; let me forget”.